by Elizabeth S. Craig, @elizabethspanncraig.com
Complex murder schemes might seem clever, but they often backfire with readers who prefer believable motives and realistic methods. The best mysteries feel like they could actually happen.
Ground Motives in Human Nature
The strongest murder motives come from universal emotions like greed, jealousy, fear, revenge, or desperation. A killer who murders for a million-dollar inheritance feels more believable than someone with an elaborate scheme involving ancient curses. Even unusual motives should connect to recognizable human feelings. Readers need to understand why someone would risk everything to commit murder.
Keep Methods Accessible
Poison requiring a chemistry degree or murder weapons that need special training can make plots feel unrealistic. Simple methods often work better: a push down the stairs, a convenient allergy, or basic household items used harmfully. The method should feel like something an ordinary person could conceive and execute under pressure, not a masterpiece of criminal engineering.
Limit the Number of Twists
Too many revelations exhaust readers and strain credibility. If the victim was secretly married to three different people while running an art forgery ring and blackmailing the mayor, you’ve probably gone too far. One or two significant secrets can drive your plot without piling on complications that require increasingly elaborate explanations.
Make Timing Realistic
Things take as long in fiction as they do in real life. Characters can’t cross town in five minutes during rush hour, and complicated schemes need adequate setup time. If your killer needs to establish an alibi, plant evidence, and dispose of a weapon, make sure the timeline allows for all of that without superhuman efficiency or impossible coincidences.
Test Your Plot Against “Would I Believe This?”
Here’s what helps me: stepping back and asking whether my mystery would convince me if I read it as a news story. If the answer is no, it’s worth simplifying. Real crimes often succeed because they’re straightforward, not because they’re brilliantly complex. Sometimes the most obvious suspect really is guilty, and that’s perfectly fine if you’ve built a solid case around understandable motives.
A simple, well-executed mystery trumps an overly complicated one every time.
What helps you keep your mysteries grounded and believable?
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That many twists in the plot would be something!
Twists are fun, but tricky!
This is really excellent advice, Elizabeth! Plausibility is a big part of inviting readers to engage in a story. Your post comes at a good time for me, too. I'm starting the revisions stage of my WIP, and those are the sorts of things I'm looking for as I do my first read-through. Even a small thing can pull a reader out of a story…
Congratulations on getting to your revisions!
Thanks for the great advice, Elizabeth. When a mystery isn't plausible, I don't enjoy it and may stop reading. And motivations and actions have to be plausible too.
It’s a real turnoff for me, too!